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May 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well, firstly, you have a major typo: POW should be POV (point of view). The only POW I'm aware of stands for prisoner of war.
As far as your fic goes, I found it interesting, albeit in a depressing way. :-) The change in the final POV from the first two was well-done; it made an impact. I'll be interested in reading future works of yours.
As far as your fic goes, I found it interesting, albeit in a depressing way. :-) The change in the final POV from the first two was well-done; it made an impact. I'll be interested in reading future works of yours.