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person Sapphire Phoenix
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I applaud you for your inventiveness! This was a cheeky little story that I enjoyed immensely. Of all of the locations that I have read for the Hermione/Severus pair ups, a dollhouse has never been one of them. Well done.

I did notice one term in your story that needs to be changed: the term is 'counterclockwise', not 'anticlockwise'. In fact, I don't think that 'anticlockwise' is an actual word.
person from a worshipper of god
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Jfc i freaking love this story. Kudos to you
person shsa0702
schedule June 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely lovely! I really enjoyed the creative and unique story plot, these off-the-beaten-path stories always seem to carry so much more to them. I almost felt like Hermione there with how drawn out their coupling was, but believe me when I say it was delicious torture! The witty banter between the two kept them wonderfully in character in a VERY non-canon type of story. Fantastic as always, I always know that I'm in for a treat when I see your penname heading a new story. Thank you!

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