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amazing Dramione. good novel length. a little angst , adventure and romance. 

spoiler alert

 

final coupling isn't until the last chapter, but the author does a great job of describing sexual tension and fantasies to fulfill the excitement in the story

I love the story.  Just curious will Blaise be back? what of Ginny? Please continue.

Best story ever!! I never wanted it to end! Please consider finishing the story with the Valiant. You've just made my life so much better since reading this! I couldn't put it down, even reading at work..... I love you!

I love a super intellgent, cocky, sexy yet mentally scarred Draco. I actually am so glad you didn't have Harry with Ginny. It is too easy and hated it in the books. I found this atory and read it all in a day. To only see not edited since 2013?! Ack! Abandoned? I love your detail with the other charactersand those lemons... oh my! Yes! So thank you for sharing your sfory and hope to see it continued h

old reader...im glad i came back to read this story again to see if it was progressing.....there isnt a rating High enough for ur story! i just love it! and i hope you do finish it!

take care!

I don't know where this is going, but I'm definitely enjoying the ride :)

Thank you for writing such a spectacular work of Draco and Hermoine. I must say I'm a bit bothered that the Valiant issue wasn't rectified by the end though. I would have liked for an epilogue at least to know it all worked out and they had their own home and potentially that Draco had also taught Hermoine what he knows of time magic as well as seeing their lives happy with children. I found myself so miffed halfway through that they had such a terrible communication.. The time between the thunderstorm and the expression of their feelings seemed to drag on forever and I ended up actually skipping sections because I was so invested in them getting together and their happiness.

I couldn't put it down however, and an added thank you for not making it uber cheesy and you did a phenomenal job keeping Draco super sexy. (See what I did there? Phenomenal? ;).. Yeah ok lame whatever).

Please keep writing! I love the Draco and Hermoine fics, maybe because I'm a lot like Hermoine myself. Just don't stop! You're very talented and brought me so many deep emotions through this where many authors here seem to just miss the mark.

One of my favorite fan fics ever.

So, I love this story. When I first read it, I thought it was going to be a typical marriage law story. It's not and I love it. I bookmarked this over a year and a half ago and still check almost daily, for an update. Please pick it back up. I amDYING to know how everything plays out!