rate_review Reviews

wow it is BRILLIANT !!!!

hee hee here comes Dracos mate. This will be a very interesting family. Is Harry with child :P Who knows but it would be interesting just the same :)

Really enjoying your store and looking forward to more when you can.

Did you mean to upload chapter 16 twice, especially as - when I checked - there didn't seem to be any difference.

Love this story, excellent relationship starter for Sev and Harry.

Did you mean to load the last chapter twice?

Great chapter! I am so glad that Harry and Severus finally did the deed. :D By the way, did you realize that you uploaded the chapter twice? xD

This is awesome hope to see more

have to pause in reading to point out two things: ch 1= it's *background* not "back round"; ch 2 (and i'm assuming further chapters) you really shouldn't interrupt the flow of the story with your little (a/n:...) things, it may seem cute "oh i keep forgetting it's draco now", but to the reader, it's disruptive. if you truly made an error, you have a backspace and delete key for a reason, if not, you're just pointlessly disrupting the flow of the story and ruining your own writing. if you really want to include an a/n, do it at the beginning or the end

I love this story!

Reread first 14 and then on to the 15th: Really seem to be emphasizing Draco & Lucius relationship with Harry. Seems like Sev is way down on the"to do " list. I can understand in a way...just getting his brother & dad(family at last?) but Sev needs attention also (being the possessive person I am). I bet Hermione is Draco's mate!!

I don't know if you're still writing this but if you are i woukd love updates.