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If James is more tolerable then I cannot wait for Chapter 3 lol. Everytime Lily opens her mouth I want to smack her for being such a spoiled, narrow-sighted drama queen. Interested in seeing what Malfoy comes up with to repay the debt!

poor harry....always worrying about others and what he can do for them. Its unfortunate that others do not spare him the same courtesy. lily's behavior was especially deplorable. Not gonna lie, she annoyed me by acting like a spoiled brat. Can't wait to read how Malfoy plans on repaying scorpious's debt.

Interesting start for an introductory chapter, with the setup of what's going
on in Harry's life.

Personally, I think he needs an extended vacation from everyone. :-/

I do not like Harry's kids in this fic. Lily seems straight up spoiled (oh no it was a 3000 and not a 3002! big deal). Albus I'm a little more forgiving because it would be highly frustrating to constantly be under your famous dad's shadow. But it still rubs me wrong that Harry is forced to watch underneath the stands under his Cloak instead of out in the open like the other parents. Withholding judgment of James since he hasn't really appeared in the story yet - I hope he'll be a little more mature than the others tho since he's older.

Good chapter. Keep going!

Very interesting start and I wonder what Harry's mistake was.

Always enjoy your writing so will be following this one. Seems like a lot of angst & not much joy in this one but I'll hope it will cheer up. Never could stand Ginny. Hate it already that Harry's life is not great like a heros' should be. Hope Draco is going to start making it better soon. I do love Draco/Harry almost as much as Severus/Harry. By the way what "mistake" did Harry make that got him a divorce from that virago?