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July 5, 2013 at 12:00 AM
hey
like the chapter please keep updating cant wait to read what happens next
cullengal101
like the chapter please keep updating cant wait to read what happens next
cullengal101
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July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Interesting concept and I'm anxious to see how you develop it. You have a few punctuation error's, such as no punctuation in quotations. i.e:. "Go now" Snape said. When it should be: "Go now," Snape said.
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July 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
For a fragile person you have picked a very rough hobby. With that said this chapter is a very good start to a wonderful story and I look forward to the next chapter.
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This was a great start. I can't wait to see where it goes!
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Great start! I loved Hermione's question that he could accept male pregnancy but not gay marriage. Look forward to more!!!
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Well how interesting; I take it this will be one of those stories where love blossoms over time? Or are you making this with a mean Snape in mind who does severe emotional harm to Harry? I'd like to know a head of time, because I don't like the ones with the cruel endings; don't mind the occasional sob parts, as long as I know there will be a happy ending. Keep up the good work, though!
Leania
Leania
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I love this I hope to see more and where you take this
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh...i like this. I'm happy to see the ability to divorce at the end and I sincerely hope this isn't a story of betrayal, humiliation or continued forced bonding. That snape will keep his word about divorcing after the tourny and it's more of a story of the one year of marriage. Will they have a different perspective of each other when it's all over or will they hate each other even more?
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
Good start. I don't think I've encountered this particular scenario before, so should be very interesting to see what follows.
Good start. I don't think I've encountered this particular scenario before, so should be very interesting to see what follows.
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June 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hope you are going to finish this. Great potential for all sorts of things.
Like the tone you have set in your story. Like that Harry sounds & acts like a 14 year old.
What is Snape up to? Where is he going to? Doesn't take that long to get magical paperwork.
You are going to finish this? Aren't you?
Like the tone you have set in your story. Like that Harry sounds & acts like a 14 year old.
What is Snape up to? Where is he going to? Doesn't take that long to get magical paperwork.
You are going to finish this? Aren't you?