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person pfeil
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That testing and punishment scene with Hermione was brilliantly done.
person jhh
schedule November 13, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hi again!!!

Thank you for continue the story. I'm really liking this story and it's good that Hermione is now truly accepting this situation, so she and Harry can enjoy it the most.

Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!
person red demon
schedule November 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
First of all Happy birthday. Second of all this was another hot chapter. Harry finally put Hermione in her place and on top of that all the girls got their collars. I am dying to see what else Harry bought and which girl he'll use it on. I kind of want to see Ginny and Daphne get some punishment tossed their way.
person 2CRsgt
schedule November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
More H/Hr goonesas! Hermione is letting Harry rape her! (Is it rape if she says YES in capital letters?) Either way she's lost IT. Now she has no other choice but to renew that contract.

PS: Will there be a side-story about the bus girl?
person 2CRsgt
schedule November 9, 2013 at 12:00 AM
So Harry has Ginny, another easy conquest. Too easy for a 16 year old boy. No matter how confident,experence counts for alot. There should some fumbling until he gains that experence.
person 2CRsgt
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The girl on the bus, you could have a whole side chapter on Harry's first sub and what they did and how. (Her sitting on his lap with him in her at the same time, wandering hands inside and up the front of her blouse. Her trying to not show anything to the other passengers or bus crew.)

Harry knows what he wants and he's after Hermoine.
person 2CRsgt
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
person 2CRsgt
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Daphine now? I never would have thought of her as being so weak willed. But somebody had to melt the 'Ice Queen' so Harry would have an easy conquest. What about her sister? Be nice to have a pair, maybe Daphine could bring her to Harry?

Good job with Harry as he kept up the pressure on Hermoine, he's going to have someone to keep Ron occupied and his interest away from Hermoine.
person 2CRsgt
schedule November 8, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Another Hermoine chapter. Harry is being sneaky about bending her to his will.
person Aranel
schedule November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like this Dom lady! She sounds like a nice friend for Harry.
Tracy has been a good girl, glad that'll stop.
I miss Hermione time!! Her slow take over is just so enjoyable.

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