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February 23, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Heartbreaking
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October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
The premise has potential. But the story falls short of its promise.
The technical writing has issues. Several typos and misspelling.
The sexual aspects are under-done. The characterizations are difficult to buy into. George, Fred, and Ron torturing a young woman to death for daring to have a brief lez affair with Ginny back in school?
Again, the premise has potential. Maybe another swing at it, author?
The technical writing has issues. Several typos and misspelling.
The sexual aspects are under-done. The characterizations are difficult to buy into. George, Fred, and Ron torturing a young woman to death for daring to have a brief lez affair with Ginny back in school?
Again, the premise has potential. Maybe another swing at it, author?