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January 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please for all of us keep going!!!!!
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December 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely and wonderful and I wish I had a potions master of my very own. Sigh... Thank you, HG4eva
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November 23, 2013 at 12:00 AM
post more soon!! its great :)
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November 10, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am glad Harry was a good enough friend to accept her choice. And, I em enjoying the start of their date. :-) I look forward to more really soon! Thank you, HG4eva
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November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 6
I first thought that this was going to be PWP, but it has turned into a surprisingly sweet story. Completely OOC, of course, but who cares? I loved Severus helping her with that potion, but it's hard to imagine Fred and George selling anything as benign as a Mani/Pedi potion. Wouldn't they want it to, I don't know, turn fingernails into claws ir something? *g*
It's also been a pleasure reading something so well-written. You actually know that the past tense of "lead" is "led." *gasp* I only spotted one typo, back in Chapter 4:
"They lay together, talking quietly. Hermione was shocked to discover how affection Professor Snape was; as they spoke he never stopped rubbing her back or touching her arms."
Should be "affectionate." Looking forward to the next update!
I first thought that this was going to be PWP, but it has turned into a surprisingly sweet story. Completely OOC, of course, but who cares? I loved Severus helping her with that potion, but it's hard to imagine Fred and George selling anything as benign as a Mani/Pedi potion. Wouldn't they want it to, I don't know, turn fingernails into claws ir something? *g*
It's also been a pleasure reading something so well-written. You actually know that the past tense of "lead" is "led." *gasp* I only spotted one typo, back in Chapter 4:
"They lay together, talking quietly. Hermione was shocked to discover how affection Professor Snape was; as they spoke he never stopped rubbing her back or touching her arms."
Should be "affectionate." Looking forward to the next update!
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November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think my favorite part of this story is how easily happy they are together. I am not sure if you plan to let that continue once others find out (Darn, Argus!), but it's really nice right now. :-) Thank you! HG4eva
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October 15, 2013 at 12:00 AM
It's just sweet that he's so enthralled with her. I also love that she's pleasantly surprised by him again and again. Loving it! Thank you, HG4eva
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October 12, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ok I had to review even if I already have it lol... You guys are going to LOVE LOVE LOVE this story I been trying to get her to make it longer for over a year now lol...
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October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3
Wow! There is more to come, right? So to speak.... ;-)
Wow! There is more to come, right? So to speak.... ;-)
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October 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I am pretty sure her answer will be yes. lol Thanks! HG4eva