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for Pride

by ElyBaby

schedule November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
A pleasure to read this tale of slow-building tension and jealousy in the charming setting of Malfoy Manor. Your version of Draco/Pansy simply aches with some twisted combination of longing, frustrated desires, ambition and concealed bitterness. Seems like Astoria and Draco will make each other very miserable after that wedding. Makes me wonder what Pansy was thinking throughout this story, and how she started doing it with Lucius...

Not that I'm objecting to the Lucius/Pansy moment - that was good hot against-the-wall sex. Almost my favorite scene, except for the final night with Draco/Pansy before they parted.

Thanks for writing this Malfoy family drama!

P.S. The room where Lucius has his desk is called a study, not a studio.

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