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November 4, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 2
Sigh. I just don't get this penchant the HP characters have for walking around with dripping hair and/or torsos after a shower. Personally, the first thing I do is dry off; that's what towels are for, after all. *g*
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Sure hope Ron doesn't continue being a prat.
Sigh. I just don't get this penchant the HP characters have for walking around with dripping hair and/or torsos after a shower. Personally, the first thing I do is dry off; that's what towels are for, after all. *g*
Anyway, looking forward to the next chapter. Sure hope Ron doesn't continue being a prat.
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November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Glitches happen, but I'm glad you could fix it :)
I'm liking this story. I can't wait to read more and see how this goes.
I'm liking this story. I can't wait to read more and see how this goes.
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November 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Intriguing beginning, hope you update chapter 3 soon ^_^
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November 2, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Delia's computer is still broken. She is over here beating my desk screaming it can't stop there! Hope your next chapt is up quick. I wouldn't mind knowing happens next myself!
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October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You have the first chapter repeating itself about ten times just fyi. But I like the begining, hope to see more :)
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October 31, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Please correct your disclaimer.
Your disclaimer doesn't have one of the two parts we need to see. It must say that no money/profit is made. Saying that it
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October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I think you need to read over your first chapter honey... there seems to be a glitch on it
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October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
looking forward to read more, looks like a good start en an interesting story!
same as what everyone mentioned: were you so eager to post that you did it more than 8 times :P
good luck!
looking forward to read more, looks like a good start en an interesting story!
same as what everyone mentioned: were you so eager to post that you did it more than 8 times :P
good luck!
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October 30, 2013 at 12:00 AM
The bit that I read was good, shame about the glitch...
Question though...surely Luna is a 7th year, not 8th?
Hope to see more of this soon.
Question though...surely Luna is a 7th year, not 8th?
Hope to see more of this soon.
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October 29, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Your story looked awesome what I read was nice. However you repeated pretty much the whole thing over several times and I was sad to not see what happened once they got to the common room :/