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January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 1
Just started reading this, and it's nothing like I was expecting! Don't think I've ever seen a story written from Trelawney's POV, and I'm quite interested to see where you take this.
Just one correction: Seamus Finnigan is Irish, not Scottish.
Just started reading this, and it's nothing like I was expecting! Don't think I've ever seen a story written from Trelawney's POV, and I'm quite interested to see where you take this.
Just one correction: Seamus Finnigan is Irish, not Scottish.
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January 1, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 5
Well, that ending
truly was unexpected - by me, at least. Next chapter should be interesting, to say the least! I liked the way the teacups represented individual people; clever touch!
Well, that ending
truly was unexpected - by me, at least. Next chapter should be interesting, to say the least! I liked the way the teacups represented individual people; clever touch!
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November 25, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Wow! You made me empathize with, and maybe even enjoy, a character I absolutely loath! Trelawney ! Lovin' the depth you gave her character. You did a good job maintaining her original character. Interesting story, not your typical H/P direction. I can't wait to see how the story unfolds! Your writing is excellent. It seems like your writing has adjusted to a J. K. Rowling-esque style for this story. The style makes for a more convincing tale, warrants more of a suspension of disbelief.