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by Sealpotter

person POTTERPHILE
schedule December 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I have enjoyed this story so much. Im not usually a big drarry fan. I prefer snarry... but this was so well done. I adored the siri.. sev storyline. I was intrigued by what you did with albus and gellert. I had certainly never seen that before. Although with Gellert generally accepted to be the power or hammer behind hitlers insanity... i am normally in favor of a strong harshjudgement. thank you for sharing your work.
person slmncpm
schedule December 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
i think it was fantastic. *smiles* i love that they had their soulmates already. thank you for all of this.
person Kat
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! Poor Sev. A Potter. Oh well. Sad for it end but all good things must,right?
person BAFan
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Epilogue

A lovely ending. Poor Harry - both sets of twins?? I feel for him. And of course you should try your hand at writing a novel. I do strongly recommend that you find a good beta, however. :-)
person Anon
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was beautiful.
I think you have and will succeed in both your endeavors.
person Meechypoo
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Fsntastic story! I really love that the grandsons of the Marauders are soul mates to the sons of Prot
person staar
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
that was awesome !!!! harry's girl with Sev&Sirus boy loved it !!!!!! and Snape always with the last word (better a another Potter than a Wesley ) !!!!!!! thanks you !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! so good so sad that it done done !!!!!!
person Naughty_megs
schedule November 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story, you did an amazing job! The storyline was really unique, and I love how you touched on the world around the characters asking changes for the better. Also the combination of couples, you definitely achieved what you set out to! Thanks for a great story!
schedule November 27, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! Thank you for sharing:)
person staar
schedule November 25, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This was a wonderful ending !!!!!!!!! you didn't miss a thing ! Thank you , it's been a joy reading this !!!! let's see were you take us in the elpi !!!!!!!

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