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Intrigue is building amongst the Slytherins and I can't help but wonder when either Draco or Severus will start off a minor issue in the house. For all of their supposed Slytherin cunning, those two are fairly incapable of true discretion.

Am still trying to figure out how Charlie was able to be at the table without some whining input from Draco. Can't wait until the little brat gets it firmly reinforced that his behavior is unacceptable and will not be tolerated. Seems like it'll probably take a few incidents of being silenced by Charlie to get his mouth under control.

Poor Harry can never seem to catch a break. Though at least he can rely on the bond between him, Bill and Sirius for support; his life doesn't seem to be getting any easier. Can't wait for Dumbledore's realization that Harry really isn't going to be fighting for his 'Greater Good' because it's bound to be entertaining.

Wouldn't it be interesting if Magic is trying to bring together the players needed to heal Harry? It might explain some of the pairings! :D

Cool story! But I really do feel bad for Lucius and Narcissa. Especially for her, actually. She was basically forced to divprce her husband. I mean, he's at least bonded, which might make this whole thing enjoyable. BUt she got literally nothing out of it...

"All he knew was that Charlie needed to understand that he was used to certain things and that had to continue". Wow.Draco is really spoiled. I don't think that Carlie will understand!

Ch. 5

This story grows more interesting with each new chapter. I liked the bedroom sequences, comparing and contrasting how the various pairings were coping - or not. I really hope we actually see the bit(s) when Molly, et al, are told what's happened, that the action doesn't occur off-page.

Looking forward to the next update.

Fascinating how some things are so predictable, like Draco being a spoiled little brat. One has to wonder when he'll decide to grow up; as he's older than Harry, he's already reached wizard adulthood. No doubt that Charlie will be tempted quite often to invoke the newly found silencing measure.

It is a bit surprising that Severus hasn't buckled down and tried to cooperate with the twins. This can't be the first distasteful situation he's been subjected to that he's been unable to immediately resolve or remove himself from.


Wonder if the Weasley siblings won't manage a meeting with their respective partners in the same room behind a silencing ward. Can't wait to see what drama and fireworks are in store...

i hope he steps up, too. but i see a great big war coming for them about these relationships. poor harry, bill, and the twins, and their partners. *sighs*

I like your story!
I agree with Sirius. In the book, i really didn't know what to think on Molly. I mean that it looks as she doesn't know which on is fred and which other is George. She's really the one who decide in the house. I think that she is too much and it is why her sons decide to really not be in the same country.

wow. this is the first time i have read this story but it is amazing just like the rest of your work.

Great update! Keep up the good work:)