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for The Long Road

by SinisterMe

person Ciara_D
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I believe you, all Remus can do is sleep. Without magic I'd be thinking he should be closer to a coma after everything. This chapter was really heartwarming. Looking forward to more.
person NarutoVixin
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I hate being sick all I do is sleep and if I'm ever hurt were I need time in a Hospital its even worse
person delia cerrano
schedule March 19, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is a great story. Teddy is adorable. What a smart little sweetie! I'll be glad when Remus is more healed and awake...healed enough to move around a bit. I don't mind if he is hurt enough to need Severus' help...hint hint.
schedule March 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
love it would love to see Remus a bit more but cant wait for an update
person Ciara_D
schedule March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ok, Fred the house elf is reaching hero status. I do wonder how long before Teddy shows more of the damage that was inflicted on him. One does not simple get over a whipping. Or maybe this is his coping mechanism. He's a wonderful boy and I hope against hope Snape find a nice easy spell to use to satisfy the enslavement requirement. No one will be happy if he's chained. He needs to be free.

I don't know if Lupin would even know what to do if he did become free, at least right now. He's so fragile.
schedule March 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Loving this completely. Can't wait for the next installment. Update soon please.
person delia cerrano
schedule March 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Looking forward to more. So far it is a fun story and well done. I like the pairing I hope you are planning...Lupin & Severus. Teddy is adorable. Remus didn't react too much to his wife being dead...hmmm.
schedule March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Please double check your numbers. The identifiers changing is quite distracting.
person Lin
schedule March 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Love this. I like how you bring in bits of Sev's childhood and Teddy is just too cute for words!!!
person elisabetta
schedule March 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
la tua storia mi piace molto ha una delicatezza e tenerezza molto rari complimenti

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