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July 23, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Now I really enjoyed. I'm loving it and beg you to continue soon.
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July 10, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This story has an interesting and intriguing start, I can't wait for more ^_^ so please update chapter 8 soon ^_~
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July 9, 2014 at 12:00 AM
bravo lol more please
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July 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wasn't sure if i would like this story, but I'm enjoying it and finding myself looking forward to the next chapter after each new one :)
Love harry/twins stories, cant wait fir find out what happens next! I agree with Ron looking forward to hermione reaction, even more so since we didn't see the Weasley's.
Love harry/twins stories, cant wait fir find out what happens next! I agree with Ron looking forward to hermione reaction, even more so since we didn't see the Weasley's.
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June 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I was almost turned off when I read it was a herm story but I am pleasantly surprised and I'm very much looking foreword to reading more from you!!! Keep up the amazing work!
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May 29, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 3
A very interesting start. I'm curious to see what happens next.
A couple of corrections:
"That was when he caught the piece of torn fabric peaking from under the knit."
It should be "peeking." I noticed the same typo in at least one of the other chapters.
"'...You have one testy and one ovary, you have a fully formed uterus and your penis is functional as well....'
A very interesting start. I'm curious to see what happens next.
A couple of corrections:
"That was when he caught the piece of torn fabric peaking from under the knit."
It should be "peeking." I noticed the same typo in at least one of the other chapters.
"'...You have one testy and one ovary, you have a fully formed uterus and your penis is functional as well....'
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April 6, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story!!
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April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Not bad.
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April 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
could you perhaps have a Dudley scene before Harry leaves, it doesn't have to have sex per say but what about Dudley basically hitting on and even molesting Harry before he leaves