rate_review Reviews

Hey!
Love the story so far :) I was wondering if you were working on any new chapters?

Very good story so far. The basis is nice, but the pacing might be a little off. I would honestly say that the story would feel better if you could get to christmas within the next couple chapters. You could probably put a branch chapter in next that is just before Christmas but has some flashbacks to major events. Also slowing Harry's leveling might be a good idea to help elongate the series a bit. One level every couple of chapters is probably good with a couple more due to things like orgies or bosses, I am assuming the basilisk will be one, thrown in.
If you need any help email me I check about once a week atleast between college and stuff.

Wonderful idea and I'm looking forward to more chapters.

wonderful work with many kinks

I'm absolutely loving this story so far! I've read similar things in the past and a reoccurring theme is the protagonist becoming stupidly overpowered and perfect right off the bat. In this one, Harry doesn't seem to be a complete protag-kun like so many others and isn't an overbearing ass. As for Harry being fingered and mind-fucked by a vampire, as well as there being hermaphrodites in this story, I have to say more power to ya. I don't think it weakens Harry's character at all or makes him gay, and even though I'm a completely straight guy myself I still thought the ogre scene was fun. It all adds flavor in my opinion. Hoping there's many more chapters to come :)

Please update ASAP we've been waiting for a while

One achievement for Hermione's first sex scene:

Shhh!: Have sex in the library

Hi, your story is awesome. I cam"t wait for the next chapter, and will we see Hermione as a :target: . With her submission to autority and her rebeliousness to wrong make her un interestion prospect. Hope you are well and that you give us a next chapter as good as it predessesor. Bruno

I love the story and like the direction it going. I would love to know what happens next or if there is a next capter

Hey bro, can you somehow let us know if this is abandoned or your just working on stuff? if its abandoned then I can stop checking for updates everyday, lol