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by fortheloveofDrizzt

person Meechypoo
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
If I leave you 15 different reviews will you post early?! :)

I love the concept and that Harry while having a sense of low self-esteem still has the perseverance to survive no matter what. I can see his relationship with Severus getting much "closer" as the story evolves and can't wait for his transformation!

Write quickly, I need to know what happens after the surgery and I want to see Severus' reaction when he finally reads Harry's potions notes!

~~ Meechy
person Rachel
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Really enjoying this story. Can't wait to see where this goes!
person Mika
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving the support that I'm seeing for your hard work! I told you that this would do well ^.^

Course I'm reviewing this so Drizzt has more motivation to write XD I'm excited to learn whom she may pair Harry with, and if it's Snape.... *shudder* I'll do my best to impartially review it XD

I love you all that have read this and I hope y'all stick around!
person Lauren Saint
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
He has a good outlook by the looks of things if things don't turn out well, but I really hope he can get better! Im sure his inheritance will fix it all up if he cant walk but hopefully it won't have to come to that :D Glad harry and Sev came to an understanding, love his potion books! Glad he is an animagi too! His wish to be potion and transfiguration masters are great! :D looking forward to more cant wait to find out what creature he is! :D
person Anon
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I really like how down-to-earth your characters are. Ver refreshing! Please keep up the great work <3
person delia cerrano
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Chpts 1&2: Looks like a good one except Harry seems to forgive Severus even before Severus says anything. Sev needs to say he's sorry he jumped to conclusions because Harry's dad was a jerk. And Albus? Don't tell me Harry still believes that Dumbledore didn't know about how he was treated!! I hope he is a very tough mean creature that can get some payback.
person Kat
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!! Harry justs wants to be normal and independent. I hope Snape and Harry can get along. They would make great friends.
person LadyFreak
schedule June 21, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I like this so far and would like to see where it is going. Please update soon
person NikiNakole
schedule June 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Continue! It seems good so far.
person Lauren
schedule June 20, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This looks good! Looking forward to reading more! :)

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