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Harry needs to sit down and figure out how he can accomplish how he wants to live his life. He doesn't want to fight any more. Well fine but that doesn't mean he has to give his life to meetings and speeches to save the world all by himself. Nor does he have to be careless, icy and cruel to Draco. Why doesn't he want to save Draco he's a "people"? I'm not sure I like this Harry. He seems very self centered, cold and cruel.

I am so in love with this story! I look forward to following it to it's conclusion!

Ch. 7

Wow. I can't remember any of your other fics generating such negative comments about Harry! Not that he isn't deserving them, at least a little. His obsession with preventing another war seems to verge on the fanatical -based on his comments to Narcissa and Draco, anyway.

"His mate would touch him. His mate would live with him. The proper emotions

I can't tell you how much I love this story. I could try, but I would fail to properly convey it. I like D/s with an edge. I love it when the supposedly submissive partner is a BAMF. This is so much of what I love and seldom see. I love how strong and powerful Harry is. I love that all of the Veela stuff doesn't really matter to him at all. I've seen Veela stories where the the submissive mate (usually Harry, Hermione, or some other non-pureblood) is expected to compromise constantly to cultures, traditions (and whims) that they have no knowledge of or familiarity with, but the dominant *never* does despite the fact that his/her mate has NO idea what Veela customs/culture entails and that always irritates the crap out of me. So THANK YOU for this story. I will add you to my list of stories to watch.

Yep. I still want someone to kill Harry. Or Draco to leave somewhere and write Harry a letter stated that he is a bastard and screw his politics and hopefully they won't meet again because Draco will be going to heaven and he hopes Harry goes straight to hell. This is the second chapter of this story that has made me cry for Draco's sake and wish Harry a miserable existence with no one who will ever love him or a family until someone finally hits him with a killing curse to the face. Hell, I'd even take Draco flirting with Ron at this point than staying with Harry and Ron punching Harry in the face. Draco deserves so much better than Harry Potter... at least in this fic. lol

I can't wait for the next chapter and hopes someone with more sense than Hermione or Harry... *coughs* Ron, Pansy, Narcissa, Neville, Blaise, a resurrected Dumbledore or Voldemort *coughs* punches Harry.

about #7...

Poor Draco will he get at least a little something from his mate? :-(

I didn't think I'd ever say this but I don't think I like this Harry. He seems like one of these martyr (excuse spell. pls}
types who give all to the cause to the point they have no life, are holier than thou, and are willing to hurt or destroy anything or anyone to his cause. Except his precious friends who no one can touch as they are perfect. Poor Draco. At the mercy of his emotions/hormones, stuck with wings and claws and a mate that couldn't care less what happens to him as long as he doesn't die or mess with his big calling. I am really going to enjoy reading how this is going to work out to anyones happiness or even tolerance. I'm sure you have a plan though. Your stories always end up wonderfully satisfying.

I'm SO loving this fic. It's amazing! The plot is so creative, it got me hooked up at once and I'm not regreting ANYTHING c: xD

I greatly enjoy all of your work! I like this story, and how it is progressing. I don't think the Malfoy's have yet understood just what they have gotten themselves into. Well, maybe Draco has! He will have some work ahead of him trying to tame the "ocean" that is Harry!! Thank you for all the good and obviously hard work you put into your stories!! I'll be waiting for the next chapter! PeriLover

about #6...

Hmph..I wouldn't have blamed Draco for giving Daphne a scratch or two. I get a feeling
if Harry doesn't set her straight soon, she'll cause a bigger problem in the future.

I find Draco's protectiveness endearing, kinda smothering but endearing...and why is Draco
using Harry's surname? I can see Harry doing it, but not Draco.