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for When There Is No War

by lexiatel

person loisa
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Aahhh I had a looking breath held in when I read that Andrew had Nemer's but when Sev reassured that he didn't I let a LNG sigh of relief out. When you introduced Daisy I was wondering if you'd pair sev with either her or Audrey. Fingers crossed it's Audrey with how things are going. I can't wait to read the next chapter
person loisa
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
My excited state made autocorrect change my words but I meant long instead of looking and *loooong instead of LNG.. I have no idea how that one changed. My poor boyfriend had to listen to me excited explain your story to him as I read it while he played the new Assassin's Creed *chuckle*
person Flandre-sama
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
bwahahaha, i loved that ending! it was PRICELESS~ this story is seriously becoming a favorite of mine^^
person loisa
schedule November 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Definitely a fun little chapter with everyone reminiscing. Now onto the mystery of who Langston is related too aswell as who his mother is. I'm still having a hard time settling on my guess as to who.
person Jan
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ssshee'ssss baaaack! I truly can't wait for chapter 35, hope that Andrew gets to see his mom too ^_^
person staar
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
ok so with your last update you killed me why why why are you doing this to little Andrew !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! heart broken here !!!!!
person Flandre-sama
schedule November 16, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Omgggggg!!!! That ending!!!! That was adorable^^ keep up the good work~~~
person Jan
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I know they want to make aged pay and all, but why can't they erase all signs of Langston from Ted's mind and home? Make it seem like he never had a child? Please update chapter 34 soon.
person loisa
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
You're really slow on these updates *cough cough* it feels like a long whole day since I last read this *chuckles*

Soo happy to see Audrey reunited with Langston. Sev really is such a great guy and I love your portrayal of him. I hate that he gets such a bad rep because of his younger years.
person staar
schedule November 15, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I second that Ted just needs to die disappear or what ever ok @!!!!!!!!!!! so glad she is getting better !!!!!!! thanks again !!!!!!!!!! see you son !!!!!

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