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by Valley

schedule December 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I enjoyed this greatly keep at it!
person Trelweny
schedule October 17, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Well... interesting premise. Hermione's character seems to be spot on. Blaise doesn't seem to match with the two lines he has in canon but that could be because you're apparently having him fancying Hermione. In which case since this is a Draco/Hermione fic I'm hoping he's not too hurt in the end.

Marcus Flint asking to be promoted? Um... he was CAPTAIN of Slytherin team his Seventh Year, when Draco was a first year. Pick someone else please? You're only going to confuse people otherwise.

Thanks for writing.

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