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by OrdinaryMortal

person BAFan
schedule December 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 20

Take that, Albus! That was quite a slap in the face for him. Good job, James and Lily. Cannot wait to see what comes next!
person ChaosLady
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
That was bittersweet. Lovely. Update soon!
person Meechypoo
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
While I'm glad that Lucius was forced to take veritaserum and confess all his crimes, I'm still afraid that he was sentenced to Azkaban instead of being killed. He may one day come back to do damage as his magic is blocked, not removed! I'm glad Narcissa has such good insight to protect herself and I know that Draco will grow up so much better for it. The will reading was sad because lily and James are gone, but so satisfying to see everyone stick it to Dumbledore! Too bad Alice and Frank aren't there as someone needs to help Neville!

~~ Meechy
person staar
schedule December 5, 2014 at 12:00 AM
wow what can I say, you had me crying with the will reading !!! was great BTW.... now I hope I don't have to wait long to see the headmasters reaction to all of this....hope someone bats him one !!!!!!!!!!!!!! thanks again and see you soon !!!!!!!!!!!!
person Jan
schedule December 2, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for chapter 19 ^_^
person Meechypoo
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
So loving this story! Severus, Sirius and Remus make for one super hot trio! Damn but that was smoking.

~~ Meechy
person Sera21
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really didn't expect a crossover to be this good. But it really, really is! I love the characters, I love Sevs dry wit and I love that you went there and still had those beloved characters die and go through tradgedy even though most people would have "saved" them. The wheel turns and some destinys can not be changed. Others can. Please write more.
person Jan
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Talk about lemons, this chapter is full of them ^_^
Please update chapter 18 soon.
person staar
schedule November 18, 2014 at 12:00 AM
just to say the way you started the story I was prying that Harry's parents were going to live but that didn't happen :( but love that Sev is his dad and now also Lupin and Black..hope that enough to protect him....hope that Narissa and Draco can stay in the picture....I hope I can soon see Bella's death without her killing any of them....So hopefully all will go to the states ...Didn't think I would like this but man I was so wrong !!!!!!!!! update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'll be waiting for more
person Jan
schedule November 14, 2014 at 12:00 AM
A very interesting and intriguing story, I can't wait for more, I love the pairing of Sirius, Remus, and Severus ^_^ and by the looks of it, it seems that both Harry and Draco might be a tight pair as they grow ^_~ {hint! hint) Please update chapter 17 soon.

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