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October 5, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A very nice one shot. Technical writing is good, few errors. The premise is nice, the sex is reasonably hot, and, most importantly, it's filled with things from the genre.
After all, a lez sex scene with Ginny and Luna that reads like a lez sex scene between any two females, just with Ginny and Luna's names and hair colors filled in would be lame (and there lots of that sort of lameness in adult fanfic). This story doesn't do that, it gives us a sex scene which is very Ginny and Luna and very appropriate to the genre.
After all, a lez sex scene with Ginny and Luna that reads like a lez sex scene between any two females, just with Ginny and Luna's names and hair colors filled in would be lame (and there lots of that sort of lameness in adult fanfic). This story doesn't do that, it gives us a sex scene which is very Ginny and Luna and very appropriate to the genre.
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December 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Cute! :)
I love Ginny/Luna anyway. They're adorable together when done right. But having a bit of furry too is a nice touch!
I love Ginny/Luna anyway. They're adorable together when done right. But having a bit of furry too is a nice touch!
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December 3, 2014 at 12:00 AM
aw, that was lovely. very well written and paced