rate_review Reviews

Nice !!! hope to see more soon !!!!!!!!

Really interesting! Definitely looking forward to more.

Interesting start

Very good beginning. Your first fanfic? Pretty good job in that case.

You do have a few word choice problems. Not necessarily spelled wrong, so spellchecker would be no help, but just the wrong word. A good beta that is strong in grammar would be a bonus to you. You also might want to check the books or one of the many official HD sites for spelling of certain things that are specific to HP.

I think your plot line so far so good and nice pacing, I a really looking forward to more. Creature inheritance fits are so much fun!

Wonderful story! I am so glad that Harry is going to get control of his vaults and accept his Fae heritage. Hopefully this will move him out of Dumbledore's control. I wonder, however, if his decision will lose him the few friends that he has? Excellent story! Can't wait for more!

this is an amazing story and i cant wait to read more of what u have coming so please update soon.
i will defiantly be on the look out for this when i check after work everyday :)
thank you for posting this and keep up the wonderful work

Ch. 1 & 2

Very interesting start. I'm curious to see where you take it. One correction: Sirius fell through the Veil, not the Vale.