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Okay so I just got done on the chapter with the Fenrir threesome and while it was fun and hot and all that...I do think fenrir was pretty Out of character.Now hear me out,I know you don't want to damage your characters to much because you love them so much, hell we all love them but it would be good if, Neville in particular could just suffer a bit more...if we could see some of teh torture just so that the love afterwards with Sev is even sweeter. I mean at this point you are only mentioning injuries in passing but how about a chap where u actually show that? Make us feel the pain and turmoil!!Anyway, I just think Fenrir was very controlled in this chap. You would think a bloodthirsty werewolf alpha male would want to mark Neville in some way, cause some damage, be more savage, want to take over...something a bit more sadistic like the man himself. But he was totally okay obeying Sev...I mean we are talking about a man who, even according to the books, brutally bit small children and masacred familys. It was all just a bit tame.

Okay I like that Draco is in there now but that its still okay between Sev and Nev. They should totally have a threeway ^^ However I'm not sure I believe that somebody can give an amazing bj the first time they ever do it. I mean hell, the first time I did it my nerves were shot to hell, I kept forgeting about the teeth thing, kept gagging from the taste and couldn't even take half. Or maybe Draco was practicing on a carrot/banana?? ;) Also, does nobody ever just give a handjob or frottage?

Wait. WHAT. *facepalm* He just walked up and told Draco to blow him in front of kids he knew were death eaters, he knew their PARENTs were death eaters? and he didn't think there might be repurcussions for that kind of action? like a) one of the kids would tell or b0 Draco would lose every shred of creduality and respect he spent 6 years building up? Good grief. That was horrible, horrible. I felt so sorry for Draco. and he actually followed him? WHY??? One bout of horniness does not equate to a lifetime of being raised as a proud Malfoy. I could belive Draco would have gone with him if nobody else was around but seriously infront of like 6 house mates???

Ah man I love this story, they are so lovely together!! Please please don't have Severus die in a year kay?

Okay I'm a little confused. They tortured him with the cruciatas but he was in a hiding place? Was was he there if they tortured him? Did they get tired and then forget that he was there because Sev hid him?

Haha, okay, explained in the very next chapter like you read my mind ^^ Thanks.

WOW, CHAPTER 21! So amazing! Choked me up good XD For some reason it really reminded me of the song " No day but today" from the Rent musical. Give it a listen if you don't know it ^^

So wait, did Snape know he was being listened in on with that badge?Because thats a hell of a break in trust from Neville. And he doesn't even feel guilty? and I'm confused as to why Snape was suddenly acting all cold again. I mean usually they are giving each other blowjobs after 5 minutes but suddenly for some reason, when they are completly alone in a room together, Snape telling him to call him professor and headmaster...what? That doesn't make any sense.Usually they are all over each other...

Lol, if I have to take a pick, I'll pick that we are all pervs 😁
Please don't let Neville die, that'll just break my heart💔 please update chapter 45 soon.

Review of chapter 1- that was awesome, I've been looking for this pairing for ever and that was just amazing. Just a bit confused as to how Neville left at the end. Wern't they locked in?