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January 13, 2017 at 12:00 AM
There are some grammatical mistakes, run on sentences, and long, unnecessary sappy speeches, but overall it was a good action & romance Dramione.
A few things didn't mesh with the HP verse, even for an AU. I also didn't like the small unnecessary changes lije Tonks & Remus being outcast from the Black family, not Andromeda, which makes no sense.
Still, overall good story and I appreciate that it's complete
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October 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
hi, I think this is my first review here, but I just wanted to let you know that I liked your story very much and had a lot of fun reading it. It was funny, well thought out with a great plot lone and deep insightful parts. Very impressiv.
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June 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Soooooo cute
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March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Ok so they say they trust her but still force it out of her? He cheats on her and the she forgive him a few days later? Yeah nah that's just annoying.
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March 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This was my first time reading a Draco/Hermione fanfic and I must say IT WAS INCREDIBLE. I stayed up all night reading this, I couldn't put it down for one second! The characters were so well written. Besides Draco and Hermione I absolutely loved Blaise, Ginny, and Dumbledore! I seriously can't stop thinking about what an amazing story this was! Please keep writing! You are great at it! Hope to see more stories from you!
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December 3, 2015 at 12:00 AM
But..but...but..but I don't want it to end!!! Awesome story!!!
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December 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
keep up the good work. i hope you keep going with it so it comes complete.
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December 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
That cliff hanger is just not fair. This is a great story. Please update again soon!
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December 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I loved this chapter but it saddens me that it's coming to an end
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December 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Re: Chapter 35
You really had me going there for a minute. Well done. Evil, but well done.^_^
You really had me going there for a minute. Well done. Evil, but well done.^_^