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for Acts of Life

by Lomonaaeren

person ChaosLady
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great update! Sneaky, sneaky Harry...
person starr
schedule June 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
So I see that even that Harry got rid of Volt they are still acting so dumb in the court system ....to bad they can't learn, they won't have a Harry all the time to kill off all the dark lords !!!!!!! and Kingley also acting like an ass too not knowing that his Autors are doing what they are doing , is he so blind !!!! good that Harry got Draco out...now lets see what happens !!!!!!!!!!!! needs some xoxoxo now !!!
person Laenira
schedule June 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Hope things start improving for you soon. Ca't wait for the next update.
person moon
schedule June 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Smiling as I'm reading :)
person ChaosLady
schedule June 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Where there is life; there is hope. Excellent update!
person Kain
schedule June 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
-Ah the dreaded time skip, we meet again.Twas in another hp fic that I encountered this most insidious of foes. Joking aside lovely chapter and I can understand the need for a time-skip to keep the story moving along.

-Surprised Ron would be all for a midnight rescue of Pansy, although I can understand how the verdict was unfair since pansy probably only said what she said under fear and stress. Granted if the other students had gone along with what she said, the light side would have been screwed.

-Yikes only a few months and already the prison and the Dementors are getting to Draco. Without Harry's visit's he may have broken long ago.

-Not really surprised to see Naricissa be sentenced to house arrest given that she didn't actually bare the mark and at worse just didn't try hard enough to slap some sense into her husband. Also pretty much sealing the victory for Harry by lying to Voldemort saved her ass from prison as well.

-Now very surprised by the light sentence Lucius received. A willing Death eater who participated in 2 Wars, lied his way out of jail the first time around, continued to bribe and scheme his way up the Ministry, almost got a CHILD killed by a Horocrux, helped get Hagrid sent to azkaban for a short time, almost attacked harry outside the headmasters office, got together with his old fellow D.E's and tormented a muggle family at the Quiditch world cup, got outed as a death eater after the battle in the ministry, escaped from prison thus not even finishing his original sentence AND is pretty much the sole reason Draco's life is as fucked up as it is. *takes several deep breathes*

-I mean if Draco and Pansy, two teens who got dragged into the lifestyle by there families and acted more out of fear and in Pansy's case didn't even technically commit a crime can go to Azkaban for even a few months you would think someone with Lucius's laundry list of crimes would either get the kiss or life without parole instead of just 5 years. the ministry is on this little vendetta deal, you would think that a guy who made them look like chumps would be given a pretty damn harsh punishment.

-Curious about how Harry is going to go about 'changing the future and how the remaining students at Hogwarts are going to act towards the remaining Slytherin's given the last year they had to endure.

Also if you are cool with it, I got another Drarry prompt if you have the time.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-
person SP777
schedule June 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yeah that's right...I forgot.
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About #5..

Well not much to say...but I'm enjoying the growing closeness between the two.
person SP777
schedule June 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
#4...

Well now about that situation of yours...I assume that you worked at an
office that dealt with law? If not, then take either Harry or Draco and
do a one shot that allows you to vent out your frustrations, where the
situation seems hopeless but the ending looks bright because you never gave up.

Do you still have your gmail account?
person starr
schedule June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
like Draco thinks hope he does make it out of that jail !!!!!! Harry did all he could...Wonder what all the redheads are going to say about that to him ?? Thanks for the update !!!!!!
person ChaosLady
schedule June 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Very dramatic! I love courtroom dramas. Excellent update!

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