Omfg. I need a pregnant Hermione and a frantic Malloy. Please?! I need to see a Baby Malfoy!!
Amazing job! I love this story. I look forward to an update!
I am laughing my a-- off at the roller coaster adventure. For someone who hates flying, I figured Hermione would go ape - also figured a seeker would fall in love with the twists and tight turns.
And thank you for having Harry explain to Ron that leaving has its own consequences and in this story he's done it to Hermione TWICE. Insensitive wanker... Needs to get the veela repellant potion and recover his brains from his saggy, hanging... You know what I mean.
GREAT chaprter.
This is t-w-o, BTW - just in case I come over as anonymous (which I'm not; I'm signed in) since the "new and improved" AFF site does that to virtually EVERY-F'ing-ONE now. *sigh...
Of the many things I WON'T miss about this site (am transitioning off sooner rather than later - see my profile), I can unequivocally say I will MISS YOU and your works in a manner beyond my lousy writing skills to express. Please finish this so I have a good reason to visit you and the group of authors/readers here who made me feel welcome.
Roller coaster... Brilliant!
Interesting plot... Check the next
thank you to share
well done again!!!
thanks to share youy wonderful story
french reader
xxx
I'm obsessed with this story! My husband asked me to watch a movie and I said I was tired so I could sneak to bed and keep reading. Haha. I hope you keep writing. If it was a book on Amazon, I'd buy it!
Really enjoyed this chapter. Just love this story, can't wait for more.