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August 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I've loved the story line and how you've worked the characters into the situations of the plot. It's occurred to me that U might want to leave all the miss-spellings & grammatical oddities as they are. Taking a note/idea from Harry's teaching method's and giving the reader an active part in the story. (It'll keep the reader focused and might make a game out of it - some type of prize, etc.) Keep up the great work and I wonder what Rowling would say? I would be flattered, dare I say, even jealous of your efforts.
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May 3, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Love this story!! Is there more coming?
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March 15, 2016 at 12:00 AM
The story was good until that whole "We are all not equal!" thing came up. Yes, we are equal in the real world. Not in ability in all things but as people? Yes. That is the main reason why no one has the right to take another person's life unless it is their last choice to save their life or someone else's life.
Too many people act like "I am better than you!" because of religious beliefs, because of amount of possessions/money, etc.
It is time to hammer down on that and state "No, you are not better than anyone else in the real world!"
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December 7, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter!!! Can't wait to see what comes next!
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November 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
A sad chapter but who is the earth mother?? Is it umbridge???
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November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm sad that he had to die but I'm glad he got to tell her that!! It just gets better and better!!
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October 30, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapter!!! Can't wait to see what happens next
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October 19, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Yes!!! I've missed this story!!! Awesome chapter!!!
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September 23, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Her conversation with her mom nearly had me crying
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September 22, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad she was finally able to get that off her shoulders!! I can't wait for the next chapter!!!