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YES! I'm glad they were disowned from both family. I can't wait for chapter 7, I really want to see Molly's reaction, and also see what Hermione has to say for herself. 

God damn it this is fucking slash. Fucking bastard if you going to write a slash story, fine go for it, but at least fucking say that it's slash in the story summary so I don't waste my time reading something that I won't like...

I am loving this so far!!! I'm anxious to hear why Hermione at least was pulling out money

Please update chapter 5 soon.

Awesome!!! Hard just doesn't want to be left behind. All his other friends are jerks soooo.... He thinks everybody else is going to leave him.

Chapter 4 please.

poor Harry and Charlie yes he is older but Harry is stronger so he needs to stop and think before he speaks !!!!! Nevelle is going to have to fix it cause Harry is really upset now ....Thanks you so much for the update and BTW Harry needs to tell Charlie bout his mom and brother and sister what they have done so he knows where Harry is coming from :):):):)):

very good 3rd chapter, nice pairing as well with Harry, Charlie,and Neville
Ill be wondering if there will be any extra mates and who will be the alpha dom.

I would think that Harry would be the Alpha because he is the more powerful of the three. Age and size don't really mean a lot when it comes to magical power.

Good start, a bit rushed but still good, however you might want to reread your previous writings, because you had wrote before when Harry first read the book the goblins gave him, that he told Remus that he was a dominate dracken and his submissive mate could have more then one mate, also that his submissive could be either male or female; then after Harry shows off his wings, they get the letter from Dumbledore and Harry isn't sure what that keening sound he hears is, and he and Remus go to the library only to have Remus tell Harry everything that Harry had told him all over again and Harry acts all surprise that he could have a male submissive? See errors like that could mess up the whole story, but it's still the beginning and it can easily be fixed, just make sure to reread your previous writings so you don't make the same mistakes.
Hope to read chapter 3 soon.