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November 2, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It's truly good to see them acting like before, but I wouldn't mind knowing why there was a weird glitch at the beginning to begin with.... Unless they thought that over the holidays their parents were going to forbid them from talking to them or something like that.... Please update chapter 18 soon.
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October 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hope Harry doesn't decides to visit his uncle at the hospital. Please update chapter 16 soon.
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October 15, 2015 at 12:00 AM
While that was interesting, I feel that was a bit of a let down. You made a significant moment of closure (one that needed to happen for your readers who have come to empathize with Harry in particular) all about Narcissa and some faceless character that you introduced with a tiny bit of foreshadowing in 1-2 chapters (like sentences worth of foreshadowing). That's a bit of a rip off in terms of how you've built up the impact of these events on Harry and all of the people around him. I really feel a bit short changed by that. Just my opinion though.
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September 18, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Will the Malfoy's find out that Harry's been raped, and abused? Please update chapter 11 soon.
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September 1, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Let's hope that Harry will start getting better again, and not worst thanks to that curse, please update chapter 8 soon.
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August 27, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh wowwill they understand whatwas nappening were they.seeing the wounds? Hmm i await more when you can.
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August 26, 2015 at 12:00 AM
wow I can see Harry mixing well with Draco, in the way he grew up that would fit better....so in this Nevell is the boy who lived.. not seeing that at all....yea all the lions are as they should be , big mouths with no action behind it.....Thanks and hope to see more soon !!!!!
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August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
well that was the 2nd time I've read a story that Harry was not put in a house...which is good , to see what happens now with that ...winder how your going to make Ron and hermione act in this one also Draco he is already in shot so hopefully Harry helps him and himself !?!?!?!?
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August 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Thoroughly enjoyed it! The random laughter made me burst out laughing. :D. I thought it was perfect length. Waiting for more! :)
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August 13, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ah. I did wonder why Harry was able to live with an obscure uncle instead of the Dursleys with the blood wards. I am assuming that Neville took Harry's role as the boy-who-lived, whereas Harry's parents were killed some other way (or maybe they took the Longbottoms' place in the Janus Thickey Ward).
I did wonder, after the first chapter, if this would be a non-Hogwarts story, and I am so glad it isn't :)
I am very much looking forward to reading more soon.
I did wonder, after the first chapter, if this would be a non-Hogwarts story, and I am so glad it isn't :)
I am very much looking forward to reading more soon.