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for The Death Eater Clean Out

by Severus1snape

person Kain
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
-Love how they are both starting to notice things about the other. Laughed at this part a bit:

"I showered, I smell great, why would he
person AnonymousTigress
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Ha Ha Didn't see that one coming. I like this start. It's got a nice pace and it features a shipping you don't see often. Keep up the good work.
person Anon
schedule August 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! Loved Percy drooling over Harry in his quiet "What, I'm not doing anything, I shall just sit here and fold my hands in my lap" kind of way :) And that murder, I seriously got a little sick woman, I CANNOT do anything with eyes, ugh, can't even wear contact lenses eye stuff freaks me out so much! Clever though, so kudos!

Mhmmm Harry, Harry, you can't pull Percy closer and push him away from his romantic feelings at the same time. Then again Harry has always been slow on the upstart, I have a feeling any feelings he might start developing for the man are going to come on slowly and with great confusion. Though I love his desperation to get Percy to lighten up and open up and his reaction to Percy's statement about sleeping with Malfoy was priceless.

I can't wait to find out what Percy has planned!! He seems so self-satisfied now that he's got Harry in the palm of his hand. I don't want to wait until Monday ;(

Lane
person Anon
schedule August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Oh I loved it! Harry and Percy's interactions are hilarious and the mystery you've set up is intriguing - a spell that only a purepblood male can cast and the murder feels he's some sort of avenging angle, cleaning out the scum it seems like. Agh can't wait to read more, these two are awesome. Let's just hope Harry doesn't kill Percy before he gets past the mans uptight defenses

Lane
person Kain
schedule August 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed the interactions between Harry and Percy. Was funny when Harry was teasing him then things got serious when he found out that Percy was in fact actually gay. I liked that.

So someone is going after Death eaters, they are a pure blood male, and would have to know the layout of Azkaban and are trying to justify there actions. Hmm perhaps a guilty for nearly getting his family killed Lucius? Like he is projecting his own self hate on to the other Death Eaters for getting there families involved with the dark lord just as he did?.

But if it's not him, is he a target as well?

I am intrigued already.

-waits patiently for the next chapter-

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