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for Of Purebloods and Wings

by Sablesilverrain

person Talliane
schedule September 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Oh wow. Just wow. Bowled over like Harry was on that last glimpse. Lol. Do we get to see Harry fake it? Very lovely wedding by the way :) *hugs*

person Talliane
schedule September 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Woohoo! Can't wait *bounces excitedly* I'm looking forward to how the voldemort problem is handled too :D but wedding and honeymoon first! *Squeals* I'm glad Lucius thought of making Harry take that potion now too. He's right he'll be too distracted in the next chapter lol. 

person Talliane
schedule September 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Lol love that Harry got Lucius to describe the posture as having a stick up their arse. Definitely can't wait for those flashbacks now that I've read your reply! When's the wedding? Please say it's soon I so want to read it!! 

schedule September 11, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Hah, thank god Ron didn´t grab one of those chocolates

person Katonie
schedule September 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I have to say I love this story so far. Harry and Lucius are adorable. And I find the creature elements to be fascinating, especially the preening. The only one thing with this story that bugs me is how Harry must share everything with his group of friends, and especially Ginny. I personally don't think every secret you have needs to be shared with your friends and it would be kind of dangerous for Harry to do anyway, even if they are trustworthy. It ruffles my feathers when someone demands information about someone's life the way that Ginny did about Draco's situation. There's been other instances in the story where similar things occur that bother me as well. Not that you should change your writing style, that would be a bad idea at this point in the story and its your voice. I just wanted to point out that it's not quite as realistic as it could be. Also, I've gotten to this point in the story so you shouldn't worry about me not continuing to read this. This story is a great concept with a cute couple and fun details. 

Keep up the good work!

Hugs & Kisses

Katonie

person Talliane
schedule September 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yay! No more secrets! Lol. Personally believe Hermione's stance on engagement is dumb, but hey life choices. Ron has a point about the purity spell, it will be lovely when you write the wedding scene :) can't wait to see that by the way lol. I can't wait to see the flashes of their previous soul bonds like you did with Draco and Severus. Assuming there are some lol. :D

person Jan
schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Yay! Severus knows the truth! It's good to see that he didn't go all crazy on poor Draco, I've read lots of stories that the partner goes ballistic when they find out, so it was a great change, so refreshing 😉 please update chapter 56 soon.

schedule September 4, 2016 at 12:00 AM

well he finally told sev huh, about time too.

Haha, hermy is such a muggle - poor ron wanting to get engaged!

person Jan
schedule August 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

I know I have said this before, but Harry and Lucius are way to adorable! I just love them! 😍 please update chapter 55 soon.

person nari-chan
schedule August 28, 2016 at 12:00 AM

the weddding is almost here! and im super excited too read the wedding and what happens after ;P. and im sorry ive not reviewed in awhile ive been so busy with life that the delightful things have had to wait :( but im here now. lol.

so please keep up the wonderful work and update soon

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