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for Backfire

by SpeedyTomato

person rowenasheir
schedule December 17, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Why doesn't Remus recognise HP scent- he is his Cub and part of pack
person autumngold
schedule December 16, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Fabulous updates! I feel like an awful reviewer for having missed commenting on your last update! Your story is amazing, thank you for having Hank save Sirius. Hopefully he will continue to keep him safe. I wonder how Voldemort feels about losing some of his best deatheaters? Dumbledore's brother had better watch his head. Incredible new chapters! Love your new story! Can't wait to see how Sirius and Harry's dinner goes!
person rigger42
schedule December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I have a hard time imagining that Lucius could find out anything Hank hasn't already -- if even that -- there isn't any link between him and the Dursleys right? Travis was obliviated and the people at the school didn't know anything either from what I gather. Unless they follow him to the Dursleys it seems unlikely anyone will learn of that connection except directly from hank. Of course, I'm wondering if Remus' sense of smell will give any clues. Not like Hank should obviously smell of his parents but I'd guess some familiarity might click.
person rigger42
schedule December 14, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Darn, will Lucius realize that Hank passed on the information? He probably wouldn't admit it to Voldemort but might start working more to entrap or punish Hank instead of his incompetent 'wooing'.... I'm rather hoping not to see Hank forced into Headquarters, but also wonder what he will do if Sirius looks threatened. I'm very curious as to what he knows that he has been holding back, and while we get tidbits about his knowing wards and other things, you're doing a great job of keeping his magic a mystery. :)

Do Order members know or suspect that Albus figures Harry needs to die to fulfill the prophecy?
person Jan
schedule December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Gotta love Sirius😁 please update chapter 12 soon.
person autumngold
schedule December 12, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Incredible updates! I love Hank and Sirius' first date, and even better is that Sirius didn't wait to make another. Lucius is hilarious, hopefully he doesn't get to discouraged by Hank's rejection. Could he become dangerous if he sees Hank out with Sirius? Thank you for your wonderful new chapters! Can't wait to see what you have planned for Sirius and Hank next!
person starr
schedule December 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Man can't wait til these two get together !!!!!!!! they are going to be so good !!!!!!!! and hope on one finds out who he is !!!!! Thanks !!!!
person rigger42
schedule December 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
I really, really like the fact that they didn't jump right into bed and that aspect was rather nonexistent and there is more building between them than lust and sex. And we STILL have no idea how skilled or powerful Hank is. LOL. Yama continues to be awesome, its amazing how much she understands.
person rigger42
schedule December 11, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm...if he gets too cocky, would it turn Hank off or make him reconsider how genuine Sirius can be, or will it just bump things up to the next level since Hank knows it is a signal of interest? Its interesting to see Sirius with a more reflective mindset, and with hits to his confidence rather than the manic, immature Marauder as he is often portrayed.
person rigger42
schedule December 9, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Okay, thats a really nice change, to see Remus, Sirius and Severus getting along, and I'm curious about the description that others still saw what they expected -- do the three of them push the image that they still hate each other? If so, why? It seems like those who kind of work with the Order are hiding as much from the Order as they do the Bad Guys or Ministry. I like the bits and pieces about how Albus isn't really trusted and the idea these three probably won't tell him even if they do find Harry.

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