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Very much enjoying this story. Keep the pages coming.

Wow. I had to stop reading. I admit the story is "fun and light-hearted" at first and not really meant to be taken seriously. But it was kind of uncomfortable to have known that Draco basically raped Hermione under the guise of "I love you" and "we are bf/gf so it's okay we have sex" and lying that he didn't know she was a virgin. I feel like he's been lying a lot to her. Is this going to blow up in his face later? It should. but I thought I'd read a bit more just to see how you'd handle it. And basically, in this chapter, yes the Greengrass sisters were horrible for doing that to Hermione. It was an awful thing to do, but to have Astoria gang-raped by five guys was a bit much in my opinion. Especially because if Draco is 16 right now, that makes Astoria 14. It was just too awful to think about and no matter how horrible she (or her sister was) no one deserves to be raped. I know this a fictional story not to be taken seriously, I know that, but it was just still awful that a mistake she made because she was young and jealous has a lifetime of repercussions for herself. It's just AWFUL to think about. I dislike how "it's because she's a slag it's okay" kind of mentality it's gotten on. No matter how much consensual sex you have with someone or multiple someones, non-consent is still rape. There are some really great dialogue parts in the story though, ones that I've enjoyed. I enjoyed the conversation on chivalry and I liked the points that were made about it. That it doesn't necessarily take away a woman's power or anything, just shows that the gentleman cares I thought it would've been funny though if it was pointed out Draco (who is the one saying all this) is that chilvalry is a supposed to be a "trait" of Gryffindors. (you know, house traits and all that, except that not all Gryffindors have all the house traits because who does?) Your story was interesting (the start of the story was unconventional, a bit OOC, but it's okay and it was enjoyable because suspending the belief like that can make lots of stories enjoyable from a different point of view.)I just don't think I like how this story is going because of the raping and the constant lying (and a bit of unprovoked character-bashing just to make the main characters seem better by comparison or the one "in the wrong"). It was interesting to have seen Lavendar pregnant but what Hermione said about abortion being unsafe and likely to kill the woman isn't statistically true. I think it's wonderful to be a person who does not want an abortion under any circumstances, it's your body and your life therefore your decision; but this just seems like a flimsy, unfounded excuse to keep the child. Again, I want to emphasize that I know this is a fictional story not to be taken seriously, and all in good fun (which it really was in the first chapter) but I feel like it's too much, too soon. So much horrible things and drama-filled things have happened too much over the course of 3-4 days. And I know they are all teenagers but this is some heavy material and it's just awful thinking about the repercussions this will have in their later life, their mental state and the fact that Daphne had to watch her little sister be raped by 5 of her classmates, Astoria having to have been raped, Hermione unknowingly having some sort of dubious consent in someone who she was supposed to trust but who lies to her about it. I just don't know if I can handle the direction of the story anymore. Thank you for writing, thank you for sharing but I'm only leaving tis review because I feel like the repercussions and the weight of everything that has happened isn't quite understood yet. Usually if I don't like a story, I exit out and won't say anything because someone else might enjoy the story and the author doesn't need to hear unnecessary criticism. I hope you know that I am not bashing your story. I really had enjoyed it, even when Draco had sex with Hermione under dubious consent I thought "oh this is interesting to see what comes of this, I guess Draco really has now 'claimed' her in a way." But with the gang rape of a 14 year girl who was carry and acting like a normal 14 year of jealous girl in any muggle circumstance, that's where I draw the line. I'm sorry.

good chapter! and I'm so excited someone else thought his dad was peacock-ing!

Thank you!! I was so excited to see a new chapter! I've been checking everyday and rereading. I really enjoy this story and the characters. I like This Draco, he's got some weird ideas about how to get Hermione, but I like that he wants her that much. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Lucius is such a scoundrel(don't ya love him!) Draco can be snarkier or rather I would like it to be...

Love,love,love it!!! Go Narcissa keep those boys in line.

Such a great story! I keep checking for an update!

OMg I love your story keep writing please I don't know if I can handle waiting much longer!!!

Fuck yeah that was hot! It was just...just...WOW. It removed my drowsiness and boredom. I was about to sleep then i thought of your fic and hoping you updated then voila shivers everywhere and all in the right places ;) ;) i hope there would be an F/F scene here, not necessarily with Hermione participating. Again this chapter is hot esp. the bj scene plus when even in his lusty mode Draco still manages to protect what is his. I'm just a bit worried that Hermione would easily forgive Draco everytime he manhandles her. Is there a chance that it would be Draco who will grovel for Hermione's forgiveness and he will really feel what it would be like without her, to lose her.
Fyi, use it! Lastly will there be a scene that draco will do the nasty secretly in the Grangers' house or Hermione doing some secretl handjob while in the presence of her parents? Fingers cross, lol.
Thanks for updating. Your story is really my guilty pleasure.