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by TheMightyFlynn

person Hestia
schedule August 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM

Are the boys going to do something at the wedding? I love how Harry and Draco get each other going. I like that you kept the intensity of their relationship going and how James went to talk to Draco. I really want the story to keep going and going, I dont want it to end after the wedding. Maybe Ginny could escape sometime after the wedding  and honeymoon and cause trouble. You've built a wonderful world. I look forward to everyone of your updates because there is always something great to read. 

person Hestia
schedule June 5, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Did one or more of the kids take the missing potions? I really love reading about your version of Harry and Draco and their family. I'm hoping there is quite a bit more to go because I really don't want it to end.
person Jan
schedule May 1, 2016 at 12:00 AM
😍😍😍😍😍😍Absolutely love Draco and Harry together! They're just to freaking adorable together!😍😍😍😍😍😍 Please update chapter 16 soon.
person Jan
schedule April 27, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Quite happy indeed😁 they're too cute together! And I especially liked the Lucius and Lily bonding moment, I found it sweet, and adorable. Please update chapter 15 Soon.
person Jan
schedule April 19, 2016 at 12:00 AM
This last chapter was sweet, I like seeing Harry getting along with Lucius and Narcissa so well 😄 please update chapter 14 soon.
person Jan
schedule April 10, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Lol, I would truly like to see Harry try and hex Narcissa as she try's to draw out blood from him 😈 please update chapter 13 soon.
person Jan
schedule March 21, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 10 soon.
person effie88
schedule March 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You write so well! Looking forward to more!
person Jan
schedule March 14, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Please update chapter 9 soon 😄
schedule March 13, 2016 at 12:00 AM
I read all the 51 chapters of "19 Years and 5 Minutes Later" in 2 days and this sequel is giving me life. These are honestly the best I've ever read so far!! Thank you for writing them. xxx

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