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Ch 22: Theo... well as long as he doesn't try anything above his station, I'm fine with him becoming a slave like Malfoy. Hehe. Loved Umbridge's letter.

This is good but seriously he's calling the egg Egg?

Oh I know what you mean, life has a way of just passing you by in a blink of an eye 😁 As for the story, I kind of feel sorry for Draco, but at the same time not so much, I truly can't wait to see what Harry is going to do to toad lady, hope to see chapter 22 soon.

Ch. 11 //NOTE: I AM REAL SICK YOU GUYS,. . . .// - Lol, when I first read this I thought it said you were "sick of you guys," which made me wonder who had been sending nasty reviews. Luckily, I did a double-take and read it again! //She took in a deep breath and he thought ‘Time to braise myself, this is bound to be long.’// I know this is unbetaed, but just for future info, the word should be "brace." "Braise" is a method of cooking. :-) // ". . . I mean, the only reason he started talking to me was because you befriended me after saving me first year and the only reason I hang out with him is because he is always with you. . . ." // Perfect summary of their relationship in this story (and many others, for that matter)! ~Debbie

Ch. 16 Well, this certainly adds a new twist do Voldemort's story! ~Debbie

Ch. 18 //Malfoy believed him wholeheartedly, he gulped very audibly and shook his head up and down in acquiescence to aid Harry. . . . // Again just FYI, Draco would have NODDED his head (up and down), not shaken it, which means back and forth. Oh, and I forgot to say that I liked the concept of Affinity Sickness. Vey interesting! ~Debbie

I can't wait for the update. Will Voldy know he has a baby when he sees Harry next? I love protective Harry, it's so beautiful.

I came every day because I could not wait! And i was starting to think you might have gave up :( I think Snape will guess it's Harry who kidnapped Umbridge but maybe hé will help Harry :D and of course I still cant wait for HP and LV to meet!

Ch 21: Hehehe. Poor little Malfoy. Harry's darkness is so delicious. I look forward to when he meets Voldemort again.

I LOVE IT! ADD MORE PLEASE!