Wow! Complex and full of empathy and insight for children caught up in wars they never should have had to fight. Well done!
Hi. Can I just begin by saying that this was a wonderfully written and thought out story. You showed the characters in a way that I always believed they would turn out. I would like to point something out though that is in no way intended to be a critisism, more a personal opinion. I understand you wishing to come across as eloquent, (no-one wants to sound as though an 8 year old could have done better) however it became increasingly difficult to read. Sentances grew complicated as I grew frustrated at figuring out what was being said and by whom. What began as a unique and thoroughly entertaining tale ended up with me feeling really rather stupid. I don't know if you still read these reviews but I would like to end it by saying that despite my opinions on the structure I thank you for breathing new life into old characters and for your creativity.
wonderful :) i enjoyed every moment
So glad to see this updated. Where are you moving your publishing? I want to be sure so I can keep following.
This story just keeps getting better! So glad you decided to continue it.
Cute story, although the time line was a bit funky.
I liked the story very much, a wonderful treat when we got back from our anniversary celebration in Branson, MO.
Your authors' notes and responses to reviews are wonderful to read. You seem to put a lot of thought into your replies and, when some reviewer needs a swift kick, your sarcasm and wit assure a delightful riposte. ....It was another great chapter to read. Like you, I see few redeeming qualities in Ron and find your depiction of his character to be spot on. I'm pleased that Harry may finally see how shallow and self-centered his old friend truly is. Luna's clairvoyance was just the surprising insight Draco needed. Now, on to the birth. Very exciting.
Hermione is so confused. I hope her head and her heart and her PTSD manage to settle and make sense of things for her soon. Your writing reveals good insight into what she is experiencing.
