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May 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Very nice. This website needs more fics like this. Less angst and more smutty fun. Especially so when it starts like this; kinky, but not hot and heavy.
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May 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Promissing start, I'd really like to see where you take this. Though I would've liked slower progress - this seemed very rushed. On the other hand, more action early on is also fun, even if not as believable. I guess it's too late to slow it down now so let's see how deep the rabbit hole goes!
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May 17, 2016 at 12:00 AM
great start. i love the idea and cant wait to read the next update. :)
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May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait to see what happens!!
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May 16, 2016 at 12:00 AM
Buen relato, no tardes en continuarlo