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for ...After Happily Ever After

by Lissa

schedule February 22, 2019 at 12:00 AM

Wow.  That was extremely difficult to read and it was not with a dry eye.  But I imagine it was probably even more difficult to write.  Well done.

schedule February 22, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I think this chapter showing Severus's pain on hearing all of her injuries was harder than reading about her torture.  Don't get me wrong, Hermione is the only female lead I read, so yes her torture was very hard to read.  Twice as tough to write I'm sure.  But you did a very thorough job and it was well written.  Snape's response made me cry however.  Well done.

schedule February 22, 2019 at 12:00 AM

I must confess that I usually only give reviews at the end.  I know writers enjoy feedback and I'm not very good at it.  Although sometimes when the chapter is funny, sad or just well written I will make a comment.  Nice to know I'm not the only one that waits til the end.  

schedule December 18, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Hello Lissa and hello Snow!

Do you recognize me? Your first german Fan? 

I feel very bad that I didn't wrote you for that long time. I don't know what happens and *boom* the time slipped away. In my life was so much trouble the past year ...

But a few days ago my mobile phone apparated me back to this website. I read the whole story again and now I finished and sitting here bursting in tears because its over.

I love this storyline, your charakter development and the fluff and the crime... everything.

I really thought you two would kill Hermione.

Now I start to read your other stories and I promise I don't wait again over a year to review! 

You two are so talented, thats a gift! I feel what the characters feel and after a few words its like I'm part of the story!

Please don't ever stop writing!

Lots of love 

LittleStranger

schedule October 5, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Ok, so I actually started following you after reading your joint story with snow. I was actually the one who recommended the Facebook page. :P I’m more of a lurker than a reviewer, sorry. >.< I just had to comment after finishing chapter 29 of this story. I’ve really enjoyed it so far, but the end of 29 got to me. It was extremely emotional, in a good way, and I actually had to turn away from the story for a minute so I didn’t cry at my desk at work. You have done an amazing job with the story, and although I cannot personally relate to how hermione and Snape are feeling, the emotions you are trying to convey really come across. I love your work and I keep hoping to see more from you! <3

schedule October 1, 2018 at 12:00 AM

Oh.... My heart.... 😢

schedule September 28, 2018 at 12:00 AM

This story has made my day!!! I finished it in less than 24 hours. I am truly in love with this!! Keep up the wonderful work. 

schedule September 27, 2018 at 12:00 AM

What, you can't just leave it like this! I'm going crazy. I read this all in 36 hrs and it's one of my favorites so far.

schedule September 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

GUYS I CANT EVEN

okay so sorry but I (admittedly) have been a silent reader and a bit petrified to review but I felt like I owed it to you guys to review (i read so many of you guys' fanfics and each one is so compelling and detailed i love it). That being said, I love the growing dynamic between Snape and pregnant Hermonie and I can't wait for the baby! How will already exhausted Hermonie cope with so many more sleepless nights? Will their kid/s ever know about the messed-up history of the kidnapping?

hmmmmm i need more than 2 more chapters lol

schedule September 23, 2018 at 12:00 AM

GUYS I CANT EVEN

okay so sorry but I (admittedly) have been a silent reader and a bit petrified to review but I felt like I owed it to you guys to review (i read so many of you guys' fanfics and each one is so compelling and detailed i love it). That being said, I love the growing dynamic between Snape and pregnant Hermonie and I can't wait for the baby! How will already exhausted Hermonie cope with so many more sleepless nights? Will their kid/s ever know about the messed-up history of the kidnapping?

hmmmmm i need more than 2 more chapters lol

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