rate_review Reviews

"mense, or the fact that she stood to lose a fortune she hadn’t got."

Sounds strange. I would just say. "She stood to lose a fortune she didn't have"

lol I doubt this version of Hermione would remain faithful for very long to Severus 

So I guiltily enjoyed this raunchy fic. I hope that doesn't offend you. I have to admit I'm a little new into the world of HP FF, and I'm struggling with some pairings. Your pairing with Hagrid and Filtch left me a little...eh. But the rest of it was naughtily fun and entertaining. Your writing is good and the story line was entertaining, even if a little off putting having Hermione be such a slut. LMBO! I took it as what it was meant to be (I hope) a good, eyebrow raising smut fest. Well done.