I was ready for there to be another problem with thone two getting together. Finally Harry got himself some action! I have a feeling Sev is going to enjoy having a vocal lover. Every single line of that chapter was perfect and definitely worth the wait. Cannot wait for the next :)
FINAL-FUCKING-LY!!!!! Normally for your chapters I take my time with them, make sure I am focused and have enough time to write a comment right after I finish reading, really invest myself. But because you promised sex with Sev as the top and all of your emails said that I probably wanted to read this chapter, I thought the past 2 chapters were going to give me sexy time... but no it was a LIE! I read them with no time to leave reviews or stay focused. Once while I couldn't sleep at 3 am because I thought maybe a nice Snarry sex scene would put me to sleep, but NOPE NO SEX! SO FINALLY I CAN GO BACK TO WHAT I WAS DOING BEFORE!!!! I did like these chapters though and enjoyed the sex scene THANK YOU! I hope the hint for the next one is Harry riding Sev but I am guessing it is the other way around.
I would leave a better (and longer) review like normal but I am very energetic and tired today and my mind can't seem to settle down so I am going to rap this up quick and I shall promise a better review next time (plus dinner is ready).
Just one more thing. Sorry for rambling on about the other fic, I was just excited to have another person to talk to about fanfiction, my family isn't into that stuff and hate when I talk about it (plus when would I talk to them about that awesome gay sex scene I just read? Not that kind of family, open but not THAT open) and I don't have that many friends, much less that are into fanfiction. Can't wait for more!!
Yahh! OMG!!! do it again, pleeeaaassssseee?
happy dance, happy dance
aaww!! come on!
You're making wait again.
The mutual handies was just a tantalyzing tease.
Is Harry really gay? update soon so I can find out
Mother of damn I'm dying here, but I know the characters tend to do as they wish at times. Goodness knows I've read enough of your work to know that!
I've read Queen of Angst's The Unbearable... series, and I really liked it. I think that's actually what got me started liking Drarry! I'll have to check out the other one you mentioned though. Can't remember if I've read it yet!
Sorry I missed chapter 20, it was a wonderful chapter. I'm glad Harry questioned his sexuality it doesn't happen enough in fanfiction.
In response to your reply you have definitely become a better writer and that's one of the reasons I read all of a fanfiction writers work. The early stuff may seem less polished than the recent stuff but it shows how reviews and responses help shape what's to come.
I'm really looking forward to chapter 22 hopefully the UST will end but keep have a feeling it may not be ;)
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You tease! Keeping us waiting still - it's just not fair!
I'll be waiting with bated breath...
Oh, SP, you cruel, cruel tease. When I read your review response I thought you were kidding about making me wait. Then I got to the end of the chapter... joke's on me I guess :P
I enjoyed this chapter, actually, despite the distinct lack of (promised) shagging (ahem). The sexy little scene you threw in was nice to tide us over, and I appreciated Harry's introspection, as I suspect Severus did also. I imagine he will feel better about boning Harry knowing that Harry is mature enough to do some self-examination.
But seriously, though. Stop screwing around and get to the screwing around! :)
On another note, I don't think you should feel obligated to do a sequel right away, as welcome as it would be. I can never force things like that in my own work. Better to write the story that inspires you, since it will undoubtedly be better than something you made yourself write because you felt some misguided obligation to do so. I will happily read whatever you write next, whether it's a sequel to Changes or something entirely new! Just wanted to throw that out there.
Love the ongoing developments.
Can't help but think returning to Privet Drive will be frought with issues.
Bring on the next chapter - (Happy dance, happy dance)
You didn't quite understand my comment (it was awkwardly phrased, I admit), and yet you started to see to it anyway, lol! The main story arch I'm referring to is the whole Harry finding the horcruxes and defeating Voldemort stuff.i love reading stories that change one detail (Harry is now a werewolf) and watch how that detail changes so much and yet still stays true to original story.
While I haven't read your recommended fluffy piece, I'm planning to soon. My roommate is reading all your stuff too (kittyfivetats) and said I had to read area of expertise first, lol. I just finished that one (wow, that was a new plotline for me!) And I'm going to tackle some fluff before I get to the sequel, lol.
I can't wait until the next chapter! I need smut, haha!