Wow, Voldy really doesn't gives up, does he? But I like that there's son many new things happening, it's refreshing, please update chapter 14 soon.
Ch13 - I liked Harry explaining bitterness doesn't last - it made sense. And it can't be good that Voldie is still refusing to give up (not that I expected him to, but still, one can hope). And yay for Jonathan just accepting Harry! I think the adults, Sirius in particular, is going to struggle with Harry being what he is. SP
One tiny little nitpick.
You can argue sucessfully that Voldermort broke the argeement firmly first not Harry based on the fact Voldermort made assumption the bargain ment his immediate family. 28 lives means there's alot of room to work with the definition of family especially to someone with multiple lives.
Johnathan is such a good big brother, but I hope he's ready to keep that silent promise against his own parents if they decided not to accept Harry. Please update chapter 13 soon
Ch 12:
Great chapter. Weeeee. Jonathan is nice.
Clever Severus.
Missed a few chapters so a bumper update for me! And, wow, life nineteen! Very clever how he defeated Voldemort in that life. Poor, poor Harry! SP
Ch 11:
Shows that there are different types of intelligence. Voldemort lacks the emotional intelligence to realise threatening Remus was not the way to go.
Hahahahaha. Go Harry!
Tense conversation there.
Loved the part about the Elder wand. I wonder if we'll ge to see Dumbledore's point of view on this.
There's something adorable about the elder wand nearly knocking out harry and acting like a puppy.
I see now why Harry doesn't like to talk nor think about his nineteenth life😱 it explains a lot, please update chapter 11 soon.
Ch 10:
Oooooh. I thought werewolf or something, but yeah, he'd hate being a Dementor and killing people for no reason. Awesome.
Stupid Voldy. Shouldn've left Harry's friends alone if he wanted to keep Harry.