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by Thunderbird

person smn
schedule August 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yas! Finally, I've been waiting for this! This new story sounds absolutely amazing, I love the new layout and I'm so excited to read more about the other characters, not only Harry's story, however it'll be interesting to see how that progresses too. Poor Andromeda, its nice to see how close Draco has come to his aunty, and I'm looking forward to seeing Harry and Draco form into father types for Teddy, even if it does mean bad tidings for Andromeda :( I'm really looking forward for this new story and can't wait to continue reading! 

schedule August 28, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love this chapter. I really like getting to know each character a little bit better. I curious to see what will happen with Mila as the story continues.

person staar
schedule August 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I'll say it here, just read the other story to this one...man was it good...now just caught up what this one....so good....I'm hooked !!!!!! hope to see an update again soon :):):)

schedule August 27, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yes! Another successful chapter! I love the depth you've given Draco. "Your reputation proceeds you", I truly loved that part. This twist about the maternity ward is nice, a unique direction. I can't wait to see how everything goes!

schedule August 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch3 - So... poor Andromeda. That's going to bring about some big changes. And now I'm worrying about Mila too! For heaven's sake, stop making me care about characters! SP

schedule August 26, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love Draco more and more with each chapter. 

Poor Andromeda and poor little Teddy - it's just not fair it makes sense that Harry and Draco would step up, even if its scary to suddenly be parents to a five year old.

schedule August 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

CH2 - What a cock tease Draco was! Poor Harry! Still, at least it wasn't just teasing. I really want to know what happened with Ves and Blaise, but no doubt I will have to wait *long suffering sigh - like I've nver made you wait for answers in my stories(!)*. Lovely stuff! And looking forward to Vesper kicking some bratty boys' asses! SP

schedule August 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Sweet, sweet smut! 

I was hesitant to say too much in my review for the first chapter simply because multiple POV stories can go sideways so quickly, but it's holding together beautifully. If you can keep the plot line(s) cohesive, this looks like it's going to be one hell of a story! You may not have revealed what the plot is yet, but I truly enjoy your writing style. I can't wait to see where this story takes us!

schedule August 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Thoroughly enjoying the way this part is starting! I Suppose (lol) I can make myself deal with shorter chapters since you said there will be more. Call me spoiled, I'm okay with that, snort!! Thanx again for carrying on with the story

Kitty5tatts

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schedule August 22, 2017 at 12:00 AM

YAY for smut! 

Draco is such a tease - poor Harry.

I just love how your Harry and Draco are together.

Very much looking forward to the next chapter.

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