You did excellent!! It did catch me off guard finding Draco being trained for a healer! I thought he was going for something to do with potions! I really need to know what happened to Blaise and Vesper, though!!
I'm assuming Ron and Hermione next chapter? I'm liking how you're switching perspectives, I just hope you write lots and lots of chapters!
Ahh the first chapter was amazing!! I just wish it wasn't left on a cliffhanger, pure evil!! I'm so curious what happened between Vespa and Blaise! I can't wait for Harry and Draco to be added into the story!♡ Your writing style never ceases to amaze me!
Yay!! I'm so glad for this story to finally be here!!
This first chapter was so good - I love Vespa! I can't wait to find out what's happened to them all since SMN. Finding this story this morning has definitely started the day off right.
Some boys are really stupid, I hope Vespa kicks their arses! They deserve it.
CH1 - Go Vesper! I so want her to kick some ass! Bloody pratty boys make my blood boil. Enjoyable start, and hopefully LOTS more chapters to come. (Oh, blatant plug for Advances - I plan to post the next chapter on Friday) SP
I've been so excited for this story! I can't wait to see where you take it!
I'm so happy! i've been waiting for this sequel! you inspired me to start writing my own. This is a very good first chapter. i'm excited to get to know Ves a lot better. Can't wait for harry and draco, but i like how you are focusing on more than just those two. Can't wait for the next chapter! do you know what days you will be updating this story?