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by Thunderbird

schedule September 9, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Yay! I always love a sassy Harry, and you've put a responsible adult twist to it. I think I like it even more!

person smn
schedule September 8, 2017 at 12:00 AM

It's great to be back! I simply have one word for this chapter and that WOW! Even though its incredibly sad what has happened to Hermione and her parents, I was totally distracted by how well this chapter has been written, seriously one of the best! Your ability to reflect the characters' emotions onto the reader is a real skill! I'm anxiousto find out if her parents will ever recover, their state seems to be severe but at least Hermione seems desperate to fix it. I just wish she would confide in Ron! Can't wait to find out more :D

person staar
schedule September 5, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Poor Hermione but she can be alot stubborn !!!!! she just has to ask for help and she'll have it.....and Draco and harry , poor things, there in for a bit of a read ther, hope Andy gets some peace even if she's sick....the boys will be so good for Teddy.....thanks for the update !!!:):):)):):):):)):):):)

schedule September 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

This chapter was depressing lol. Hermione is going to get people mad at her for keeping that a secret!

Honestly, I need more Drarry though!

 

Great chapter as always, are we returning to Vespa next?

schedule September 4, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I love Unstoppable and SMN. Can't wait for more of the story. What is going to happen with Teddy and Andromeda?

person Anon
schedule September 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

"No one can know, except her Healers, not unless I give my consent. If it gets out… it will make for a very tricky situation for me, for them. I simply can’t let that happen."

This line intrigues me.^_^

schedule September 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

I must confess, that while I may be a dedicated reader (although there are sometimes I don't live up to my name), I struggle to be a dedicated reviewer. This was a sad chapter, yes, but not poorly written. However, it also seems kind of empty to review this chapter when it's obviously setting something more up. I look forward to being blown away by the more, until then!

schedule September 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Ch4 - Poor Hermione! And all that guilt eating her up, nto allowing her to share her burden with Ron. Here's hoping for something a bit cheerier for the next chapter. (Or else!) SP

schedule September 3, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Oh Hermione... You aren't making this easy on us are you?

schedule September 2, 2017 at 12:00 AM

Chapter 3 man, poor Andromeda, you're a monster!!! That being said, I love Draco getting a perspective, does he still use the potions lab in their house??

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