Got sidetracked by real life, imagine that, lol Sorry for the delay in getting this to you
darlenegopp@mail.com
Loved the last chapter btw!!
Kitty5tatts
I just wanted to say I'm loving the story so far! I am part of the lifestyle and have been active in it for about 5 years now. I just have one little thing that bothered me when I got to the spanking scene in chapter 3. Severus says hermione has to obey what he says, since he is in the dominant role. I do not agree with his next statement that she must listen to commands any dominant gives her. Submission is something that is earned and given. No dominant can order around any submissive and expect them to listen. I understand what you are trying to convey here, but I believe it needs a little more clarification. Sometimes being new in the community, people can be taken advantage of and will believe what they are told by hearing something like this, it might lead her to believe she has to listen to anyone who identifies as dominant, which is not the case.
Eithef way, I will keep on reading it, because I love this pairing and your writing style is pleasant and draws me in. Also kudos to your beta/writing partner. :3
I love this story! I don't live this lifestyle personally, but I love reading about it. You definitely let the reader know why this would be so appealing. Keep it up!
You keep turning up the heat! The scene was hot, Snape is seriously in denial, while Draco may present an interesting twist! I'm excited to see where you take it next!
This chapter was so lovely, I have no words! I absolutely loved it! While I'm saddened that your chapters won't be coming as frequent, with as busy as your IRL is, I'm surprised you plan to post as often as you said! I can't wait to keep reading!
That was freaking excellent. I loved how, no matter how good Lucius was, she's still missing Master Snape's special touch!
Okay, so I should start by saying there scene was bloody hot. The plot is also developing in well and I for one need that in a story. I am interested to see where it goes and if Severus can get the courage to admit how compatible they are together. I do hope Lucius calls him all his BS but that may just be me!
I am enraptured already! D-R is not your only submissive reader, lol. It is very reassuring to those of us that truly live this lifestyle that there are writers that want to provide reading material that strives to be as realistic as it can be in this wonderful alternate universe. The content and the way the two of you are presenting it, fantabulous!!
I have roughly 18 years experience in the lifestyle, if either of you want an extra source to pull from. Let me know and I'll provide my email. Won't be offended if not either, lol
Kitty5tatts
It did live up to my expectations! I'm so excited about this story!
Oo! Silly Severus, he just set himself up for a fight, didn't he? And Lucius, falling into the same old misinderstanding; a woman who's dominate in her vanilla life can't be submissive! Bwahahaha, I look forward to seeing Hermione put him in his place...or be put in her place, as the case may be, lol. I'm too excited for the next chapter, please don't tease me too long!