This was an amazing story. There are a lot of spelling and grammatical errors; which I usually can't stand and would have stopped reading the story entirely. However, I enjoyed the story too much and was able to get pass it all. I do hope there will be a sequel in the future. Thank you for the story.
Great storyline and entertaining read. There are a few spelling/grammar errors (but very few and they don’t pull you out of the story). One thing to note is there is some inconsistencies on the snake collar and it’s effects when using Master vs. Tom vs. Riddle. All in all great read!
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Can't wait to finish reading!!
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