rate_review Reviews

That was a thing that happened... I kind of wish this was longer .It was actually really good in an odd sort of way. Like a complete story was told despite it being a one shot. Good job!

Well that was erotic fun and also funny. I get the feeling the team are going to have to admit defeat, else their going to be in a worse condition that Luna the following day. ;) Or are we going to have a 2^nd chapter? :)

  One small syntax quibble,  Should it be of a century or of the century?  The latter would be the normal form I think?