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for Returning to Hogwarts

by TheSlytherinPhoenix

person shannt27
schedule January 7, 2021 at 12:00 AM

Amazing. I love it. Please do not abandon this story but keep writing. I would love to see them together and happy!!

person Handaxe
schedule December 21, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I cannot begin to say how much I enjoyed these added chapters

I have believed that the slow fuse always leads to stories worth reading and moreover enjoying.

As I mentioned before, it is a skill I wish all others would learn, and JKR could have done with as well.

I really hope this series continues to see it becoming a long and beautiful story

My thanks and appreciation to the Author.

person Photoboy
schedule December 16, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Another great chapter!  Thanks!

person saxman66
schedule December 13, 2020 at 12:00 AM

  Excellent.  Provided Harry doesn't chicken out out they should now be able to be honest with each other.  Presuming they stay in separate rooms I wonder of Hermione will find her night terrors gone?

 

 That is a magnificent home although I think it will get even better with Hermione and a few friends there to bring it to real life.  He is going to have trouble extracting Neville from that garden however.

person Photoboy
schedule December 1, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Thanks so so much for the new chapter!!!  This is the one story I'll read before it's 'complete'.  As I've said before I love the characterzation of both Harry and Mione.  I feel it's so spot on.  My one critique is that I feel they both would be bolder toward each other given what they each have gone through. I realize they each fear rejection concerning their single most important relationship but I still think they would act on their feelings.  That being said I love the story so far.  Please write more and faster ;).  BTW I love Potter Cottage.  It's perfect!

person saxman66
schedule November 14, 2020 at 12:00 AM

  Well their both totally besotted with each other but doesn't realise the other feels the same so until someone takes a 1st step or something else pushes them into actually admitting how they feel this could be a long wasted oppertunity for them both.

 

  Good to see another update and hopefully things are well at your end. 

person Handaxe
schedule November 13, 2020 at 12:00 AM

I don't known if you'll ever see this but I thoroughly enjoyed this story, more so than any other I've read on this site.

It had the plot and build up that is so lacking in other.

I cannot rate this highly enjoy.

I just hope that you may return to complete this one day with several more chapters

person Photoboy
schedule September 22, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Thanks so much for writing another chapter. I love how it's building!  

person saxman66
schedule September 22, 2020 at 12:00 AM

 

  Interesting slow  burner as they both fancy each other but are convinced the other won't be interested.  Although I suspect Harry might take her up on that bet, in a way that would surprise her but also make her very happy if he can get her to enjoy flying.

person Photoboy
schedule September 16, 2020 at 12:00 AM

Really just a wonderful beginning.  Well done!  The characterization of Hermoine so far is spot on.  Please please please add more soon. 

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